Thursday, December 4, 2008

"The Day My Mom Saved My Life" by Morgan Barker

All the kids entered Reflections this year. The theme was Wow!!! Creighton and Bennett did Visual Arts and Morgan did Literature. Morgan ended up being a finalist in her school in the Literature category. Tonight we had an award ceremony where all the finalists were honored. Morgan wrote a story, and it is handwritten and all in her own spelling and grammar. Here is the story, just like she wrote it:


The Day My Mom Saved My Life by Morgan Barker

Based on a true story

I was jumming on the trampoleen with my brother then he went inside. A few minets later I fell in between two springs and hit my head on the wall and got stuck. I was haning upside down with my head barly touching the ground. I was crying and crying for help. then a thout entered my head saying say a praery. So I did. It was three days befor my step dads birthday. My mom was tring to hid a present because it was almost my step dads birthday She thout ubout hiding it in the garauge but somthing told her to put it outside. She followed the coice inside her head to put the present outside. She did. Wile she was doing that, she heard crying and she found me hanging there. She took me inside. Allthough I was outside hanging for thirty minets. My feet were tingling like crazy cause my legs were bent. After she took me inside she rubbed my legs, and feet. After a wile I felt better. then my head started to hert. She rubbed my head and I felt better for the rest of the day WOW! I am glad my mom saved my life!!!

We are so proud of her.







4 comments:

Anonymous said...

We are so proud of Morgs! I loved her story and the way she wrote it.

I love the changes you did to your blog! So cute! How did you get the pic on your header so it wasn't gigantic? I couldn't figure it out. That's why mine is huge!

Anonymous said...

Dang, my pic was already on the shrink to fit. I wonder if it has anything to do with my camera.

Sassy Sue said...

Morgalou - that was a very special story that you wrote and Grandpa and I are so proud of you. You are really rackin' up the medals!! Way to go!!!

mariann and Tory said...

K! SHaweeet blog! I LOVE your background stuff and music!! I am impressed with Morgans story! Awesome! Glad I found your blog!!